- 英検準1級スレ Part161
930 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 (ﾜｯﾁｮｲ f7bd-7TBo)[]：2018/10/30(火) 00:30:22.76 ID:15LU5fh30 - この荒らしは他スレで定期的に英作の添削を依頼してるよ
なお添削者に対して居丈高に反論するので誰にも相手にされなくなったもよう
はっきり言って人間性は最低だけど英語に関しては普通に上手い部類だと思う
196 名前：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 (ﾜｯﾁｮｲ d7bd-aQox)[] 投稿日：2018/10/03(水) 03:08:28.90 ID:rITDlvLc0 [3/9]
Essayを二通り書きました。
添削宜しくお願い致します。
A. Whether or not to use robots often raises complicated issues. However, I believe that robots will play more roles in the future for two reasons.
Firstly, robots can solve a serious labor shortage that has been worsening year by year.
For example, the nursing care industry in Japan is suffering from a severe lack of nursing care workers. They can be replaced with robots.
Secondly, we can use robots in such a place as an industrial site where a terrible accident may happen.
For example, in a nuclear plant, robots can do what humans cannot even if they are exposed to radiation. They will be very helpful when an emergency has arisen in the plant.
For the above two reasons, I believe that robots will play more roles in the future.
B. Whether to use robots or not often raises complicated issues.
However, I believe that robots will play more roles in the future for two reasons.
Firstly, using robots, we can solve a serious labor shortage that has been worsening year by year.
For example, the nursing care industry in Japan is suffering from a severe lack of nursing care workers. They can be replaced with robots.
Secondly, we can use robots in such a place where a terrible accident may happen.
For example, in a nuclear plant, robots can work even if they are exposed to radiation. They will be very helpful when an emergency has arisen in the plant.
For the above two reasons, I believe that robots will play more roles in the future.
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